FEEDBACK FROM EXTERNAL STUDENTS

Judging from the feedback that I gathered from external students that are not in my media class I noticed that everyone believed the idea can work and that we have a very interested plot. It is always good to get constructive criticism and we got that from two of the students. This was that they didn't think the taxi driver just giving her her water was a good idea and would be alot better if we had a close up of the driver putting a pill in the drink to show he is going to poison her before she gets in the Uber taxi. This means that we have used our feedback well and will hopefully improve our thriller film. Overall I was very impressed and happy with the feedback as it seemed we have got the idea and plot spot on as the students were very impressed.


From this we learnt that men are very more likely to watch the movie if the female actress is attractive, therefore we have made our actress attractive.



 From this pie chart we are confident that people like our movie overall, however there are some improvements to be made.
From this pie chart we have mixed views of what our viewers think of the film, they suggested different endings to our original, therefore we have adjusted it so it is more believable. 

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